Now again I am comparing my double page article to again another immensely sophisticated magazine, this magazine teaches me a thing or 2 about how to create a successful magazine and in this case it seems my text is too large and child like for it seems we have a lazy writer, and I must stress how the border makes this image very boring! But I must say well-done to such useful background gradient which is nicely done and realistic to some extend, great text but could have been bolded to an extent of making it more prominent this I have failed through out my magazine.
Apart from that I have enjoyed the extra features which this writer/ editor has added truly sophisticated text and realistic and great how the text has conjured around the text leaving the image fresh though amateur this photographer is great in capturing emotions and expressing them with simple effects.